Twilight, take two

So basically I'm planning to do a follow-up on Artrix's take on those ponies, like I said earlier. It's basically the same premise, a lineup of the MLP:FiM cast, and they're humanizations.

The goal is to actually learn from my mistakes and make it more appealing, and holy shit does that show in this image. After I sketched out a full-body shot of Twilight Sparkle and put the first version next to it I was dumbfounded just how terrible the first version was. Progress, it feels good.

But that's no excuse for complacency. Some of the hecklers on Livestream were able to give me some pointers, and I'm putting it here with critiques enabled, in the hopes that someone might want to give me some pointers, particularly on the anatomy.